You've got all three of them perfectly down, from Rose bossing the Doctor around to the Doctor's mock-wounded vanity and Jack's flirting and teasing. Absolutely perfect. This made me laugh out loud:
Brilliant, Rose had decked him. That was Rose speak for "Let's keep this one and feed him tea and biscuits".
Jack demanding the full tour was spot-on; the Doctor actually giving him the full tour and Jack subsequently falling asleep in the middle of a discussion about calcification was hilarious. And this for the win:
"You do like him," she sang out quietly and smugly.
"I do not!"
"Doctor, you're disappointed he fell asleep during a talk about calcification properties. You don't do that unless you actually enjoy the conversation."
"I like to talk, me."
"Well, yeah." She peeked around him and smirked. "You got everything set up for another cup of tea, too. In case he woke up or something?"
Oh, and of course Rose had to remove even-asleep Jack's hand from her bum!
This should also be posted on better_with_3, by the way; there are many fans of the Rose/Nine/Jack relationship (friendship or romance) who read there but not here. Oh, and if you feel so inclined, keep an eye on my LJ as the Doctor/Rose/Jack ficathon will be offering additional prompts (http://wendymr.livejournal.com/116009.html) this coming weekend for anyone who's interested - we would love to have you on board :)
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You've got all three of them perfectly down, from Rose bossing the Doctor around to the Doctor's mock-wounded vanity and Jack's flirting and teasing. Absolutely perfect. This made me laugh out loud:
Brilliant, Rose had decked him. That was Rose speak for "Let's keep this one and feed him tea and biscuits".
Jack demanding the full tour was spot-on; the Doctor actually giving him the full tour and Jack subsequently falling asleep in the middle of a discussion about calcification was hilarious. And this for the win:
"You do like him," she sang out quietly and smugly.
"I do not!"
"Doctor, you're disappointed he fell asleep during a talk about calcification properties. You don't do that unless you actually enjoy the conversation."
"I like to talk, me."
"Well, yeah." She peeked around him and smirked. "You got everything set up for another cup of tea, too. In case he woke up or something?"
Oh, and of course Rose had to remove even-asleep Jack's hand from her bum!
This should also be posted on