ext_23768 ([identity profile] wendymr.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] indiana_j 2008-06-21 08:33 pm (UTC)

Ooh, you posted both! Wonderful! :)

I loved this idea:
“I stopped belivin' in coincidences a long time ago, Jack,” Rose said softly. “I think that at some point, our first Doctor is gonna make his way through the Void, closed off or no, and we got ourselves a ride home.” Her thumbs brushed his cheekbones softly and he leaned into the touch. "Someone started this self-fulfillin' whatever it is, yeah? Seems only right that we close the circle when we find him again. Start this whole thin' all over again."

So she and Jack have each other for as long as they want for ever, and somewhere in the future Nine's going to appear and reclaim them. Wonderful!

I'm assuming that's what the italicised bit at the end refers to, though I would love to see it written properly as a sequel to this story. By the way, here:
He chalks it up to another causality

I think you mean casualty, though in a different context 'causality' might make sense.

Lovely story! Thanks for writing it :)

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