ext_23768 ([identity profile] wendymr.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] indiana_j 2008-06-20 11:37 pm (UTC)

You know, you really should have posted this on [livejournal.com profile] available_very. I would have missed it if not for [livejournal.com profile] who_daily!

I really thought you were going to end this chapter before Rose and Jack actually met. And then they met, and I thought you'd end it before they worked out who each other was. And then you did what you did and I'm AARRGHH!!

Very well done, having them work it out - it makes total sense for Rose to tell the truth not expecting it to mean anything to him. And then for him to know, and feed the rest of the story back to her. Brilliant. And now I dislike Ianto more than ever. But I am guessing that Rose is immortal; you certainly hinted at it with that gunshot story.

By the way, is Sarah-Jane from our universe too? It sounds as if she knew the Doctor.

Looking forward to more!

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